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编者按：DearColleagues:IamHeadoftheDepartmentofInternationalFinanceintheSchoolofEconomicsattheBeiji...

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DearColleagues:

IamHeadoftheDepartmentofInternationalFinanceintheSchoolofEconomicsattheBeijingUniversity,perhapsthemostprestigiousuniversityinChina,andIamwritingtorecommendMr.HuiDushu,oneofmyfavoritestudents,foracceptanceintoyourMaster'sprogram.

IgottoknowhimpersonallylastsemesterwhenhewastakingthecourseofSpecialTopicsonInternationalFinancethatIwasteaching.Intheclass,heshowedgreatinterestineconomics.Hestudiedconscientiouslyandoftentalkedwithmeaftertheclassaboutthequestionsthathehadcomeacrossinhisreadings.Oncewhenwetalkedaboutthecountry'songoingrestructuringofitstaxsystem,hedelvedintotheincreasingcostoftaxevasion.Wethendiscussedseveralmethodsofcalculatingthecost.Aswetalked,Ifoundthathewasveryskilledinexpressinghisideasthroughdiagrammaticcurvesandmathematics.Recognizingthatthegovernment'sattitudestoactsoftaxevasionwillaffectnotonlypeople'sbehaviorbutalsothecostoflevyingtaxes,hesawpossiblesolutionstotheproblemintheGameTheory.Iencouragedhimtopursuethisidea.Hesaidhedidn'tknowmuchabouttheGameTheoryandproceededtoborrowsomeessaysbyNashfromme.Hethusleftmewithadeepimpression.

Studyingwithconscientiousness,Mr.Huioftencameupwithcreativeideas.Unlikesomeotherstudents,hestudiednottojustpasstheexamsbuttoreallyimprovehisknowledgeandexpertise.Hestandsoutamonghisfellowclassmateswithanunmistakablethirstforgenuineunderstandingofthecountry'seconomicrealitiesandproblems.Thathaswonhimappreciationfromnotjustmebutmycolleaguesaswell.Buthediddowellinexamstoo.Inthefinalexamoflastsemester,hegotahighscoreof90formycourse.

Heoftentalkswithmeabouthisidealtobecomeaneconomist.Tohelpquenchhisthirstforknowledge,Ihavelentmanyofmyownbookstohimandtutoredhiminhisself-studyprogram.Hehasbeenmuchmoreengrossedindoingindependentresearchthanpreparingforexams,buthisgradesstillkeephimrankedamongthetop25%ofhisclass.Ithinkheisaveryintelligentyoungfellow.

Mr.HuihasagoodcommandoftheEnglishlanguage.Asheiswellacquaintedwithme,hehasoftenhelpedmeinmyownresearchbytranslatingsomeEnglishessaysthatIamtoobusytotranslate.Histranslationsareusuallyquitegood.HisoralEnglishisgoodtoo.ComparedwithotherChinesestudentswhomaybeapplyingtoyourprogram,IthinkMr.Huishouldbeconsideredmorefavorably.

Wellgroundedinthetheoriesofeconomicsandthemethodologiesofeconomicresearch,andproficientinEnglish,Mr.Huishouldmakeanoutstandingstudentingraduatestudies.IhavenotseenmanyChinesestudentswhoaresointentonachievinganacademiccareerineconomics.Ifyouaccepthim,youwillfindthathisdriveandsenseofpurposeverycontagiousamongthestudents.InviewofallthatIknowofhim,Istronglyrecommendhim.Ifyouwanttoknowmoreabouthim,pleasedon'thesitatetocontactwithme.

Sincerely,

MingJiaoshou

ProfessorofEconomics

HeadofDepartmentofInternationalFinance

AssociateDean,SchoolofEconomics,BeijingUniversity

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DearSirorMadam:

AstheChairoftheDepartmentofInternationalFinance,I'mpleasedtorecommendMr.Hui,myfavoritestudent,toyouresteemeduniversity.

IgottoknowhiminmyclassofSpecialTopicsonInternationalFinancelastterm.HehasgreatinterestinEconomicsandthirstforknowledgeaboutit.Hestudiedinmyclassconscientiouslyandoftentalkedwithmeaboutthequestionsthathemetinreadingandstudy.Once,wetalkedaboutthedesignofthetaxsystem.Hesaidthatsincepeoplealwayswantedtoevadetax,theincreasingcostthatcausedbyitwasanimportantproblem.Italkedwithhimseveralmethodsofhowtoaccountthecostcausedbyevadingthetaxandfoundthathewasveryskilledinusingdiagrammaticcurveandmathematics.Finally,hesaidthatthereactionofgovernmenttotheactionofevadingtaxofpeoplewouldaffectthebehaviorofpeopleandthecostoflevyingtaxes.HesaidmaybethesolutionoftheproblemwouldexerttheGameTheory.Iencouragedhimthisidea.Hesaidhedidn'tknowmuchaboutGameTheoryandborrowedmesomeessaysaboutitwrittenbyNash.Mr.Huialwaysstudiedwiththisseriousattitudeandoftenpointedoutsomecreativeideas.HisstudyistoimprovehisknowledgeaboutEconomics,notfortheexam.ThisishisdistinctionfromothersandIappreciatehimforit.Intheendoflastterm,hegotahighscoreof90intheexam.Butmostoftheexamsaredogmatic,sohehasn'tgotthesamehighscoresinthem.

Heoftentalkswithmeabouthisidealtobeaneconomist.SoIoftendosomespecialinstructionstohimandlendmanybooksabouteconomicstohim.Hespendsalotoftimeonthemandseldompreparefortheexams.Thoughhiskeepsaveragescoretop25%inhisclass.Ithinkheisveryclever.WhenIwaswellaquatintedwithhim,heoftendosomefavortome.BecausehisEnglishisgood,IoftenlethimhelpmetotranslatesomeEnglishessayswhenIambusy.Healwaysdoeswell.HisoralEnglishisgoodtoo,soIthinkhewillbemorecompetitivethanotherChinesestudentstoapplytoyouruniversity.

Hehasastrongabilitytoorganizepeopleandisreadytohelppeople.Hisclassmatesalllikehimandelectedhimasthepersonresponsibleforsportsactivities.HeorganizedhisclassmatestotakepartinthesportsmeetingofPekingUniversityeveryyear.HealsoorganizedsomebasketballandfootballgamesthatweretookpartinbyboysandgirlsbothintheDepartmentofInternationalFinance.ItmadehisclassmatesarichlifeintheUniversity.

Mr.Huiisaveryactivestudentandhealwayskeepshighspirit.IthinkhehasenoughthingsinhimtogotoAmericatostudyEconomicswithhisperfecttheorybase,hardworkinghabitandfluentEnglish.Ihopeyouwillaccepthim.Ifyouwanttoknowmoreinformationabouthim,don'thesitatetocontactwithme.

Sincerely,

MingJiaoshou

ProfessorofEconomics

AssociateDean,SchoolofEconomics,BeijingUniversity

Chair,DepartmentofInternationalFinance