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编者按:DearColleagues:IamHeadoftheDepartmentofInternationalFinanceintheSchoolofEconomicsattheBeiji...
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DearColleagues:
IamHeadoftheDepartmentofInternationalFinanceintheSchoolofEconomicsattheBeijingUniversity,perhapsthemostprestigiousuniversityinChina,andIamwritingtorecommendMr.HuiDushu,oneofmyfavoritestudents,foracceptanceintoyourMaster'sprogram.
IgottoknowhimpersonallylastsemesterwhenhewastakingthecourseofSpecialTopicsonInternationalFinancethatIwasteaching.Intheclass,heshowedgreatinterestineconomics.Hestudiedconscientiouslyandoftentalkedwithmeaftertheclassaboutthequestionsthathehadcomeacrossinhisreadings.Oncewhenwetalkedaboutthecountry'songoingrestructuringofitstaxsystem,hedelvedintotheincreasingcostoftaxevasion.Wethendiscussedseveralmethodsofcalculatingthecost.Aswetalked,Ifoundthathewasveryskilledinexpressinghisideasthroughdiagrammaticcurvesandmathematics.Recognizingthatthegovernment'sattitudestoactsoftaxevasionwillaffectnotonlypeople'sbehaviorbutalsothecostoflevyingtaxes,hesawpossiblesolutionstotheproblemintheGameTheory.Iencouragedhimtopursuethisidea.Hesaidhedidn'tknowmuchabouttheGameTheoryandproceededtoborrowsomeessaysbyNashfromme.Hethusleftmewithadeepimpression.
Studyingwithconscientiousness,Mr.Huioftencameupwithcreativeideas.Unlikesomeotherstudents,hestudiednottojustpasstheexamsbuttoreallyimprovehisknowledgeandexpertise.Hestandsoutamonghisfellowclassmateswithanunmistakablethirstforgenuineunderstandingofthecountry'seconomicrealitiesandproblems.Thathaswonhimappreciationfromnotjustmebutmycolleaguesaswell.Buthediddowellinexamstoo.Inthefinalexamoflastsemester,hegotahighscoreof90formycourse.
Heoftentalkswithmeabouthisidealtobecomeaneconomist.Tohelpquenchhisthirstforknowledge,Ihavelentmanyofmyownbookstohimandtutoredhiminhisself-studyprogram.Hehasbeenmuchmoreengrossedindoingindependentresearchthanpreparingforexams,buthisgradesstillkeephimrankedamongthetop25%ofhisclass.Ithinkheisaveryintelligentyoungfellow.
Mr.HuihasagoodcommandoftheEnglishlanguage.Asheiswellacquaintedwithme,hehasoftenhelpedmeinmyownresearchbytranslatingsomeEnglishessaysthatIamtoobusytotranslate.Histranslationsareusuallyquitegood.HisoralEnglishisgoodtoo.ComparedwithotherChinesestudentswhomaybeapplyingtoyourprogram,IthinkMr.Huishouldbeconsideredmorefavorably.
Wellgroundedinthetheoriesofeconomicsandthemethodologiesofeconomicresearch,andproficientinEnglish,Mr.Huishouldmakeanoutstandingstudentingraduatestudies.IhavenotseenmanyChinesestudentswhoaresointentonachievinganacademiccareerineconomics.Ifyouaccepthim,youwillfindthathisdriveandsenseofpurposeverycontagiousamongthestudents.InviewofallthatIknowofhim,Istronglyrecommendhim.Ifyouwanttoknowmoreabouthim,pleasedon'thesitatetocontactwithme.
Sincerely,
MingJiaoshou
ProfessorofEconomics
HeadofDepartmentofInternationalFinance
AssociateDean,SchoolofEconomics,BeijingUniversity
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DearSirorMadam:
AstheChairoftheDepartmentofInternationalFinance,I'mpleasedtorecommendMr.Hui,myfavoritestudent,toyouresteemeduniversity.
IgottoknowhiminmyclassofSpecialTopicsonInternationalFinancelastterm.HehasgreatinterestinEconomicsandthirstforknowledgeaboutit.Hestudiedinmyclassconscientiouslyandoftentalkedwithmeaboutthequestionsthathemetinreadingandstudy.Once,wetalkedaboutthedesignofthetaxsystem.Hesaidthatsincepeoplealwayswantedtoevadetax,theincreasingcostthatcausedbyitwasanimportantproblem.Italkedwithhimseveralmethodsofhowtoaccountthecostcausedbyevadingthetaxandfoundthathewasveryskilledinusingdiagrammaticcurveandmathematics.Finally,hesaidthatthereactionofgovernmenttotheactionofevadingtaxofpeoplewouldaffectthebehaviorofpeopleandthecostoflevyingtaxes.HesaidmaybethesolutionoftheproblemwouldexerttheGameTheory.Iencouragedhimthisidea.Hesaidhedidn'tknowmuchaboutGameTheoryandborrowedmesomeessaysaboutitwrittenbyNash.Mr.Huialwaysstudiedwiththisseriousattitudeandoftenpointedoutsomecreativeideas.HisstudyistoimprovehisknowledgeaboutEconomics,notfortheexam.ThisishisdistinctionfromothersandIappreciatehimforit.Intheendoflastterm,hegotahighscoreof90intheexam.Butmostoftheexamsaredogmatic,sohehasn'tgotthesamehighscoresinthem.
Heoftentalkswithmeabouthisidealtobeaneconomist.SoIoftendosomespecialinstructionstohimandlendmanybooksabouteconomicstohim.Hespendsalotoftimeonthemandseldompreparefortheexams.Thoughhiskeepsaveragescoretop25%inhisclass.Ithinkheisveryclever.WhenIwaswellaquatintedwithhim,heoftendosomefavortome.BecausehisEnglishisgood,IoftenlethimhelpmetotranslatesomeEnglishessayswhenIambusy.Healwaysdoeswell.HisoralEnglishisgoodtoo,soIthinkhewillbemorecompetitivethanotherChinesestudentstoapplytoyouruniversity.
Hehasastrongabilitytoorganizepeopleandisreadytohelppeople.Hisclassmatesalllikehimandelectedhimasthepersonresponsibleforsportsactivities.HeorganizedhisclassmatestotakepartinthesportsmeetingofPekingUniversityeveryyear.HealsoorganizedsomebasketballandfootballgamesthatweretookpartinbyboysandgirlsbothintheDepartmentofInternationalFinance.ItmadehisclassmatesarichlifeintheUniversity.
Mr.Huiisaveryactivestudentandhealwayskeepshighspirit.IthinkhehasenoughthingsinhimtogotoAmericatostudyEconomicswithhisperfecttheorybase,hardworkinghabitandfluentEnglish.Ihopeyouwillaccepthim.Ifyouwanttoknowmoreinformationabouthim,don'thesitatetocontactwithme.
Sincerely,
MingJiaoshou
ProfessorofEconomics
AssociateDean,SchoolofEconomics,BeijingUniversity
Chair,DepartmentofInternationalFinance